Score: 4

"Underwhelming"

submission: The Raven

date: September 7, 2008

Now I have been told...repeatedly...that I often expect too much, but come on, man. Your delivery of this poem was dry and emotionless and the "art style" lacks any real depth or feeling. The entire tone of this piece..in my opinion...is much darker and more macabre than you've made it seem. I do appreciate the work, though, and I do understand that making flash is a hard and time-consuming process. Overall, I think this was a fairly good piece, I just think it could have used a bit more work.

Pretty good.

Score: 9

"Wow...That's all I can say..."

submission: Forsaken - Episode 1

date: June 4, 2008

Dude, stick figure animation or not, this FREAKIN' RULED!!!!!!! My God, I would watch more of this in a heartbeat! This is better than half of the full drawing stuff I find on this website.

I only gave it 9 stars for two reasons. Number one, it's a stick figure ani, and I can't in all good conscience give sticks a full 10. Number two, the briefing from General whats-his-face went by a bit fast...I couldn't quite catch it all the first time.

Other than that, though, this is...dare I say it...PERFECT.

Keep up the SPLENDID work!^_^

Score: 6

"To the glory of Loklain!"

submission: Black Knights Episode 1

date: February 25, 2006

Wow, I must say...that was pretty good! A lot of things dragged it down, though. The animation needs work. There are more than two frames in a galloping horse. The art is very good but...hmmm. How do I say this? It's OBVIOUS that you have style, but your style needs refining. It's quite sketchy, and the proportions are off. I'd like to see more! This should prove to be quite good! Keep practicing, dude!